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got a few things
1. crop it, then zoom in, cause all that empty space is killing these art pieces.
2. Love the solar glare that adds more to in then simple shapes slapped on a shaded spigit of cyan red.
3. add some circuitry like copper wiring and tin board, go nuts with it FILL IT UP!
pretty much it.
you do that ill give you much better score.
I'll try... ;)
somewhere up in the sky...
Ben Spurgin is smiling upon you...
Greatest approval you'll ever get killing sticks.
Heres an awesome idea!
make it so hes pointing at the rated button as it says M (just for kicks) then that would have made the this piece even that more incredible.
amazing~
you sir have won just more than the internet
best thing to come back to when getting back from a shitty day at college
thanks!
score!
you got 2 now.
my favorite's blueberry poppy seed mix.
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OMG THATS EXACTLY WHAT FLAVOUR IT IS.
HOW DID YOU GUESS THAT?
ARE YOU SOME KIND IF WIZARD?
insomnia produced this?
just shows how dedicated you are, glad to see more activity from you again.
detail couldn't have been more ideal, the especially the light; i always did love how you illuminated an area of artwork.
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Preciate it buddeh. Yeah, I figured I needed to do something, I've been cheating on Newgrounds this year with college, so I'll just do this instead.
Stunning.
The colors have obviously been mixed well with a great deal of patience and effort.
The human figures of of great proportion as does the environment they walk upon.
The trees, bushes, and flora really seem to be brimming with the natural prime life.
Housing in the distances gives the scene more structural weight via the red rooftops in conjunction with its complimentary color of green foliage.
Though the clouds in the distance seem more like smoke rising from the ground aside from that its my only gripe.
Good luck!
Whoah!! Thanks alot for the critic mate...i really appreciate it...and hope to improve some more...must practice100x heheh
well lesson learned...
Don't play with The military's surplus or shit like is gona happen.
looks action packed raw running fear and excitement.
can't wait till you finish :3
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Myeah I'm not sure if I'm gonna revise this piece ,maybe a new one with the same kind of concept and some more detail.. buuut! I'll see.
Alas, I'm glad you like it the way it is now!
o i can just imagine him saying this...
"Margret, where are mah bowling shoes?"
"Margret!?...Oh damn i stepped in nachos, Han solo in a handbasket SOME-ONE FIND MY DAMN SHOES!"
There is no right or wrong in art, it simply just is, it is perspective experience within existence made from the audience, or the artist
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